A wedding coordinator and a bride are behind the doors of the chapel. The music starts to play.
wc- ok thats your cue
b- um, um, i don't think i can do this
wc- what? yes you can, you'll be fine!
b- no i can't do this
wc- just breathe, its only your wedding day
b- thanks for the reminder
wc- sorry, ok just breathe with me, breathe in and breathe out
b- ( breathing in and out)
wc- good, good, keep breathing
b- does this dress make me look skinny?
wc- what? ya of course , you look beautiful
b- thanks!
wc- ok , the flower girls have gone its your turn
b- no, no , i can't! this is to much to handle. will you tell everyone i am sorry.
wc- no because you are doing this. you CAN do this. now get out there!
b- i can't, I'm sorry..... tell adam I'm sorry and that i love him.
wc- where are you going?! come back here!!!
The Beat
ReplyDeleteAction: Bride wants to leave her wedding. Wedding coordinator wants the bride to stay.
Conflict: The two characters are preventing each other from getting what they want.
Event: the bride gets what she wants and leaves. The Wedding coordinator does not.
Changes: i feel like the way the bride left was weak, because what the wedding coordinator was saying had no affect on her. maybe i should have had the coordinator give more reasons for the bride to stay.
This is sad. Poor Adam. But it's good!
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